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November 2012

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marzmetal in slashthefate

Pairing: Max/Ronnie
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters. This is purely fiction
Summary: max worries about what will happen when Ronnie is released from prison. (1/?)
Warnings: Rated for future chapters. Minor language in the first chapter


    Max Green awoke with a start, his blue-green eyes fluttering open. He looked around remembering he was on the Escape the Fate tour bus. He reached for his phone to check the time. The clock read 4:21am. "fuck," Max thought to himself. " I need to get some more sleep. We have a show tomorrow."

5:11
   "fuck it," max whispered to himself before sliding out of his bunk. He slipped on his vans grabbed his pack and his lighter before heading outside for a smoke. This had been happening to Max a lot recently and it was beginning to grate on his nerves. He knew it was related to the fact that he could not get his mind off a certain Ronnie Radke. Ronnie was set to be released from prison in less than a week. Max had only gone to see Ronnie once while he had been locked up. His visit ended in tears and he could not bear to return another for another one. 

Flashback
   A guard led Max into an unfriendly visiting room and told him to wait there. Max took in the white walls, the barred windows, and the coldness of the metal tables bolted to the white linoleum floor. Finally, Max heard the sound of the other door in the room being unlocked and saw a pale, clean Ronnie walk through it. Max noticed the look of surprise that graced the features of his oldest friend, Ronald Joseph Radke. Max didn't know what to expect from Ronnie. To say he was nervous would be an understatement. Ronnie allowed the guard to remove his handcuffs before he made his way to the table Max was occupying. 

"what do we have here?" Ronnie said sarcastically. "well well well, if it isn't the traitor," Ronnie sneered, continuing.

"Hey, Ronnie." Max said timidly. For the first time Max was second-guessing his idea to visit his former best friend.

"What are you doing here, Maxwell?" Ronnie asked venomously.

"I came to see you, Ronnie." Max replied unsure of himself.

"No shit." Ronnie replied, "why?"

"You're my best friend, Ronnie. I wanted to make sure you were okay. And-"

"And what?" Ronnie asked mockingly.

"And I missed you..." Max said quietly, looking at the ugly floor. He couldn't bare to see the anger on Ronnie's face. The anger that was directed at him.

"Then where the fuck were you when all this shit was going down Max?" Ronnie questioned. "I would have never left you fucking alone Max. Never!"

"Ronnie, please-," Max tried.

"No, Max. I don't want to hear it. Just fucking leave." Ronnie said cutting Max off mid-sentence. "fucking leave and don't come back."Max just continued to sit across from his former best-friend, dumb-founded and at a loss for words. Before Max could think of anything to say, Ronnie was standing and heading towards the door he had entered from. 

"Ronnie, wait." Max tried right before the former reached that foreboding metal door. Ronnie stopped, pausing in front of the door before he continued his exit without even turning to look at his oldest friend.

"Ronnie..." Max said to himself under his breath, alone in the room that offered no comfort. Max continued to stand alone in the room for about 5 minutes before turning to leave the prison. He willed himself not to cry as he left the building. Max walked outside as if on auto-pilot, lost in his thoughts and his memories of Ronnie Radke. The Ronnie Radke.

Comments

Interesting start.

Would be easier to read if you fixed the formatting and such though. It's essentially a giant paragraph right now.
Haha I know. I haven't written anything in a while. I wrote it with all the correct formatting and it kind of just nudged together in the process of posting. I plan on fixing it : )
This is really cool, its got a better sound. than most of the stories I've read :D
Thank you so much! Haha that made me smile quite wide!

:)

This is great so far! Please continue! <3
Oh a new one >: haven't seen one in awhile